Post #13
How the Earth spins.
One thousand paper cranes dance upon the golden illumination cast from an endless array of motion pictures. However much their squawks go unnoticed, tradition is nevertheless expected, for the beauty of society is one to behold when it grants new life yet retains what makes it special. And though our Earth still bleeds leftover radiation from a time long past and remnants filter through the non-stop streams; each marked by their own brand of mask crafted from progression envied worldwide, the wish to re-grow the flowers is granted by the birds that cry and weep uncontrollably at our unfortunate time.
“Arigatō gozaimasu”
. . .Thank you. . .
Cover photo from: Ted Strutz (FF) and written for Friday Fictioneers
A lovely, poetic story that conjures up hope and longing both. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Anne. I am glad it had that effect.
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oh my, you write with such beauty. well done.
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Thank you for the wonderful words. I am glad you enjoyed reading.
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There is so much in there, I hardly know where to start… a wonderful, thoughtful poem.
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I am very happy you thought so. Thank you for reading.
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I love the imagery in this piece.
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Thank you for reading and the kind words.
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Dear Chekii,
Very poetic piece with a pointed message. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for reading and the kind words, Rochelle. Good luck with your novel!
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Well, I must say that’s one way of looking at it. Poetic and well-thought out. Bravo, Chekii!
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Thank you for the wonderful words, I am delighted you enjoyed the story.
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Very good. I’m glad I followed the bread crumbs you left on my blog. By the way, WordPress thought you were spam. I’m not sure how you prevent that.
Tracey
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Thank you ever so much for visiting my blog and reading the story. I am not sure why my blog was put into spam, but perhaps a manual override on the page for spam could work, as you would be changing its settings on who is spam and not.
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poetry and illusion to overcome despair. Well done
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It sure can make some difference. Thank you for reading and the kind words.
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Your piece was both sad and lovely, Checkii. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne, I am pleased you enjoyed the story!
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